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Calling on the brotherhood for help-poetry help

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by 84gmcjimmy, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. 84gmcjimmy

    84gmcjimmy 1 ton status

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    Can someone help me find a short poem with a obvious, yet good theme? It can't be too long, but not too short either. The topic doesn't really matter, as long as it is not corny. I have an english assignment I need to finish, but before I finish I need to find a poem to respond to. It has to have poetic devices (metaphor, similie, alliteration, etc) at least 3 times, and have a theme that I can explain.

    Any help is appreciated, I have searched for the last 5 days and over 1.5 hours looking for a reasonable one but cannot find one.

    Thanks
     
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    An unforeseen future
    nestled somewhere in time
    unsuspecting victims
    no warning no sign
    Judgement day
    the Second Coming arrives
    before you see the light
    you must die

    Short, right?:D
     
  3. Desert Rat

    Desert Rat Fetch the comfy chair

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    We Are the Music-Makers




    We are the music-makers,


    And we are the dreamers of dreams,
    Wandering by lone sea-breakers,
    And sitting by desolate streams.
    World-losers and world-forsakers,
    Upon whom the pale moon gleams;
    Yet we are the movers and shakers,
    Of the world forever, it seems. ​

    With wonderful deathless ditties
    We build up the world's great cities,
    And out of a fabulous story
    We fashion an empire's glory:
    One man with a dream, at pleasure,
    Shall go forth and conquer a crown;
    And three with a new song's measure
    Can trample an empire down. ​

    We, in the ages lying
    In the buried past of the earth,
    Built Nineveh with our sighing,
    And Babel itself with our mirth;
    And o'erthrew them with prophesying
    To the old of the new world's worth;
    For each age is a dream that is dying,
    Or one that is coming to birth. ​

    Arthur William Edgar O'Shaughnessy






    And if you don't like that one: http://www.poemhunter.com/
     
  4. chevyfumes

    chevyfumes Court jester

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    There once was a man from Nantukit,,,,
     
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    You have to make it to third base first to understand...........:D
     
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    my ding-a-ling,
    my ding-a-ling,
    She must be playing with my ding-a-ling. :wink1:
     
  7. 84gmcjimmy

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    Anyone want to take a stab at the theme in this peom?

     
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    dontoe 3/4 ton status GMOTM Winner

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    I'm out'a 22 LR! :wink1:
     
  9. Corey 78K5

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    Sounds like plagiarism to Me.
     
  10. kyser_soze

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    Talking about his ex I suppose.
     
  11. 84gmcjimmy

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    Why is it plagiarism? I am simply asking for help? Must you always harp on me?
     
  12. 84gmcjimmy

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    Anyways thanks for the help everyone. I ended up finding a different poem by Robert W. Service

    Thanks
     

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