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Poem

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Z3PR, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. Z3PR

    Z3PR Banned

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    In your love is my death, feel my dead heart beat stronger. This go's on forever, but I can wait longer. It kills me when he touches you. Every whisper, every kiss. But your years are my seconds, your misery my bliss.
     
  2. Resurrection_Joe

    Resurrection_Joe 1 ton status

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    Pretty decent, muddled meaning, but almost perfect spelling!
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    Here's on back at ya

    Ummmmm

    The green of trees bleeds into the
    Encompassing black night
    The starlight is an aged thing
    And everyting's all right
     

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