My wife and I are real estate agents. We are targeting off roaders as our niche. The majority of off roaders like trail rides (90% or more) so I want to re word the intro paragraph to be about something other than a mud hole, but still be gripping and interesting. The whole thing is supposed to make us appear friendly, yet professional. I think we focus a bit too much on off roading in these first few paragraphs. If you have some suggestions or re wording, I'm glad to hear them. Our site where it is at is in my sig. This will also go on our brochures. ========================== TEXT ========================= As they sat back looking at the massive mud hole in front of them, "Floor it!" Brianne yelled to Branndon, signaling him to tackle it full throttle. It's that attitude and adventureous spirit which guides them through their everyday lives. As far back as they can remember, Branndon and Brianne have been advocates for the thrills and sense of freedom hitting the trails can offer. There's never a dull moment when offroading, and it's sure to be an experience they'll never forget. Slipping off their sandals on a clear summer day at the beach to strapping on their snowboards after the season's first snowfall, these Orange County natives activities' change with the season, but their one passon that thrives year round is off roading.